Hey all,
I was about to post on friday (as usual) but the something was wrong with the internet connection. But now i have posted, and hope you will enjoy.
The part 6 is be devided into 2/more parts. My classed has started so it is almost impossible for me to write big chapters. i believe you understand.
Cordial love and lots of thaks to the readers who commented and liked my writing. Your each and every word boosts up my energy and me update. So I belive you will comment and will keep me writing. Do write what you felt, your suggestion and motivation is all I need!
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Part 6(a):
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The sun rays make them both stir at morning.
Arnav opened his eyes slowly and watched Khushi
sleeping; taking one hands under her
cheeks, he felt the silky texture of her skin.
“Morning, beautiful!” Arnav whispered in her ear huskily.
“Morning…. Arnav ji…” Khushi clutched his arm, yawned and
rubbed her sleepy eyes like a baby.
“You know you are so adorable?” Arnav looked at her half
closed eyes.
“I do. (smiling) but tell me what are you doing here Arnav
Ji?” Khushi used to calling his name adding with a’ji’ when she will sound
cheeky… “You should not come here every morning….”
“Really?” Arnav arched an eye-brow. It was only some weeks
since he came and actually it is not everyday when he will sit on a arm chair
and sleep with Khushi.
“Ya. Every morning you will come, wake me up from my sweet
slumber and then when I will try to touch you, you will vanish…”
“Vanish?”
“Vanish!” She stressed that word, “I know you again came in
my dream only. Just when I will try to kiss you, you will leave me…” She
pouted.
“Oh… then let’s try again, shall we?” Arnav leaned on her
cheeks and planted a kiss soundly.
“hawww!” Khushi’s eyes popped out, “You….you are real?” she
asked, still out of breath.
“I am!” Arnav eyed her lips. “But you never told me your
secret desire, did you?.... It seems I should known the better uses of these
rose buds…”
Khushi covered his lips with her palm and nodded a ‘no’ in
the sweetest way possible. His blushing princess had a huge tingle-red blush
all over her face. Her honey-eyes shone brightly with love and satisfaction.
She steadily hid herself in his arms, where Arnav’s
protective arms held her close; out of every bad the come across.
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That night Garima and Shashi had
a huge fight. Garima was desperate to give birth her first child in her
maternity home, but Shashi wanted his princess and queen before his eyes, in
the mension. His work will not permit him to stay away from Rajasthan for long.
And here Garima was stubborn than ever.
He did not understand…why?
But Garima did.
As each day passed, she felt more
suffocated. It was not the costly lifestyle, the different cuisines, the big
high-status-life.
It was a fear.
She was unknown at first. Then
tried to ignore thinking may be this is how ‘rich’ people used to behave. But
slowly it felt like a poison.
Poison was in the air.
She could not say it to any one,
except Kavya.
“Are you okay Garima?” Kavya had
asked her that day. The young girl had lost her apatite a lot, she barely ate, barely slept… dark circles
has take their place. She no more laughed, or cracked jokes. Once, she was the
only rays of life here. But…..
Kavya prayed. Hope his husband
was not behind this. Hope.
“Hold fast to dreams,
For if dreams die
Life is a broken-winged bird,
That cannot fly.”
“They say a person needs just three things to be truly happy
in this world; someone to love, something to do and something to hope for.”
Kavya had lost the hope from her
life. She always tried to cling onto life. She hoped, one day she will just
open her eyes and will see the change. Change in his husband; love, respect and
cooperation, these were what she wanted from him.
But the bitterest truth was
different after all.
Her husband’s eyes were on
Garima. Who was like her little sister.
And apparently he is after her
child. A child of Shashi and Garima. Avinav could not bear that Garima can have
a child with someone else.
“Get out of here …Garima…” Kavya
merely whispered.
“Wh—what?”
“He will not let it live…
(Touching the unburned child)… hide yourself somewhere… or he will not…” She
gasped for air.
Poison was in the air….
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Avinav was looking intently on
the printed invitation cards… which one to choose? “Each of these has one fault
or another.”
“What do you want?”
Avinav looked the person standing
in dark. “What are you talking about, amma?”
“This love, this care…? You have
never cared of your children, did you? Then why this party?” Her wrinkled face
twisted with distaste for her son, “You must have a reason behind…”
“I do!” Avinav said calmly. “By
the way, they are NOT my children, whoever they are, they are Kavya’s. But to
have done my work in my way, I can do anything. Looks like you forgot, amma?”
“I did not! That is way I asked
you, Avi.”
“I will declare my son’s marriage
date.”
“What???” Dadi asked bewildered.
“You have heard right! Arnav will
get married to….”
“Khushi??”
“No… with Sheetal.”
Dadi sat on her sit with a thump.
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“I want my daughter’s marriage to be held with Arnav…”
Garima spoke to Sashi, “Consider it as by last wish…”
“I never believed you would do this to us Avi!” Shashi
broke. “At least think… think of Bhabhi ji!!”
“What is there to think of Shashi? Good bye, to you two…”
Avinav cut the call with a grin….
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Allah Hafiz!
Afia Zahin (Ananna123)



That update is really something. It had all, the tender loving moments, the pasts dark black eye still lurking around!
ReplyDeleteThe moment between Arnav and Khushi is really cute. That showed one of Khushi's sad life she's been living, the dream that would let her hopes up and would crash the next second she tried grasping them. And now with Arnav around, she's going to see life.
Yet again, the past black eye, with the pity look back on the update. The sufferings Garima came clashing with, in the name of Avinav, Kavya trying to spread out her wings and protect her new found sister, Shashi's obliviousness, his own contradictions, everything were so well briefed.
And now, yet again, the present turning wild again. Avinav is back on his gandha trips. He doesn't believe them to be his children and yet he says he is his son? How can he be this heartless? Wondering what storm will he be hit with when the news of his doings reach the lion's ears!
Waiting for the next dhamakedaar update. Will be anxious enough!
Sorry for the late this time Afia, was busy. And don't ya worry, we can understand. It happens. So chillax and take your time! We will wait too!
Love you Afia. Hugs & Kisses for you :* <3
thanks for the comment Sravs :) yes i understand your late comment. Actually me too is busy like hell (As my classes has already started) so hope you will cope up with my late entries. Love you a lot, as always!
DeleteAfia <3
Wow! Fantastic update!
ReplyDeleteArnav-Khushi scene was lovely!
Avinav is playing again with his son's life! Hope arnav gets to know about this soon!
I am sure his son is going to be responsible for his destruction!
Thnaks to almighty you liked it :) I was chewing my nails in tension!
DeleteBut anywas, now i m relived!
love you for your lovely comment. I will try to update as soon as possible.
<3 <3
Finalyyyyyyyyyyy..... finallyyyyyy I am here & read all the three updates which I missed :D :D :D *happy dance* Now no need to use pistol Anaaaaaaaa... Do you here me?? NO NEED TO USE PISTOL... Bring it away from me :P :P btw Mind blowing updates dear... I am in love with the updates :D Arshi's sweet & cute moments are so chui mui wala *toothy smile* Aww poor Khushi, though she was living in hell, she always thought about Arnav... & she said it loud in front of Arnav too.. So Sweet :D This Avinav..... AAAARRRRGGGGHHHHH... Like his name, he is really an AVINAV QUALITY.... >:( I so wished that his own son will be behind his DESTRUCTION... Eagerly waiting for the next update.... continue soon..... love you dear.....
ReplyDeleteWhere is the update????
ReplyDeleteIts been so long:(
Waiting Afia.......