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[Part 3]
Anjali stole a glance to the table. She had been too conscious
not to make a noise.
Looking again around her she took easy-small steps.
The wooden table was her father’s…the black-polished thing
had a ancient timed phone and some large drawers, containing all the letters,
cards and even some recent photos of Arnav.
“It’s locked…” Anjali made a face. “But never mind….” She
took a thin book, a telephone directory, “May be it has the number.” She smiled
with victory.
Her thin hand took the huge receiver in her hands, “There…
this is my chote’s number…”
Just at that time a hand took hold of her hand in a vice
like grip. Anjali’s eyes popped out, a shrink left her lips. She was sure whose
hand was that.
But it was not what made her feel scared.
“Dadi ji…” she looked at the hand’s owner.
There came the face of an old lady, draping a white
costly-designer saree. Her eyes were hidden behind a spectacle, and a long veil
on her head. At the first glance anyone may think of a loving-caring grand
mother. But she was anything but not ‘loving’.
“So you are here again?” She glanced to the open book. “Maaf…maaf
kar dijiye dadi ji…hum toh bus…” Anjali shuddered.
(For… forgive me grandma, I was just…)
“That is what I want to say, ‘Bus’” She glared Anjali. “How…how dare you put your
leg in this room?”
She whispered outraged.
“I didn’t want to… I just want to have a look to my chote
dadiji. I am his sister! It’s my cursed fate that…”
“That is what I am saying Anjali!” She cut her words, “You
are ill-fated! You are cursed! You could not even save your husband… you know
why? Because you can’t be a fortune to any one! Your touch will turn everything
into impure!” Dadi ji shouted.
Anjali bit back her cries, “I know you don’t like me… but my
chote do! Let him just come….You will just see, I will be the one he will first
ask for …. I will be the one he will first embrace and I will be the one he
will first take blessings!!” She shouted with anger.
“Till then, get out!” Dadiji had no intention to show the
entire house ‘What is going on’.
“Of course, Mrs. Subadra Singh Raizada!”
Anjali said bitterly. With hurried steps she started to leave the room.
“Today…” Her dadi ji glared her
back, making her stop. “Today chote is coming.” Anjali just nodded curtly,
before vanishing in the long way towards their room…. Anjali and Khushi’s room.
“Hari Prakash!” Dadi ji shouted to
one of the servants, “Ghar ki shudiya karwani paregi… jaldi se aao!”
(Will have to purify the room…come
quickly!)
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Evening…
“I told you not do this, then why?”
Khushi was almost crying. ‘Only I am guilty…’ she thought. ‘I should have known
her intentions…”
“No khushi…you are certainly not
the reason. It was my decision to try my luck, again.” Anjali continued, “Like
you, I did not see him over years… how he looks? How he talks? Is he the same arrogant
when comes to his wants, but again a possessive brother when it comes to me?”
Anjali held her hands, “I just wanted to know if he was coming today…. But will
they answer? Will they let me know? NO! They will humiliate me again, so I had
no other way out!”
“I understand di…” Khushi
whispered, taking her crying form in her arms, “And I love you….”
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Mid night… 3am.
The mid night sky was in its full
form, the quietness and stillness was its divine beauty. The early spring was
blowing a cool heart warming air around the small village. The soil was little
moist and held a captivating metallic smell was on the air.
The darkness soon equivocated with
the head light of a giant-like SUV.
The white vehicle moved like a spring
wind towards the Raizada Mension. The way seemed to be too long… time crossed
from mid night to early dawn…
But it was till okay. The young
man sitting inside of the car with expensive designed navy blue suit and white
shirt underneath… his expressive brown eyes were hidden under shades. His sharp
features were reflecting his eagerness and ignorance at a time.
“Why am I here? When I know… It
will be the last place where I would want to step my foot… then why?” He closed
his eyes….his back touched the smooth leather seat submissively.
“I need to be here….
For my Di, for my Khushi.” He told
to himself.
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Next part:: Some scenes!!
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Author’s note: As I wrote before, the story is based on the imagination
and the plot was based on India ,
so there are some words of lines which is written in the language ‘Hindi’. I
did try to write in English mainly, but sometimes it is impossible with some
words. A little hindi will also give you a essence of India I hope!
But I am going to translate some words for the readers, hope
it will help!
1)
Chote: Younger One.(A nick name)
2)
Di: sister (a form of calling like ‘sis’, etc)
3)
Bauji: Father (a form of calling father like ‘Dad’,
etc)
4)
Dadiji: Grandmother (a form of calling
grandmother)
5)
Bus: Enough/just.
6)
Maaf: Forgive.
I have translated the hindi sentences in the update itself. So
read the update if you didn’t understand any sentence.
Till then, Allah Hafiz!
Afia Zahin (Ananna123)




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You are right! This is Nishaa!
ReplyDeleteBTW, I didn't like the update but LOVED it!!
You got me hooked to this afia!
Feeling sad for anjali, just bcoz her husband cheated on her, she is being considered as ill-fated? How can her family treat her like that? Hate dadi!
For a second while anjali was talking to dadi, i felt that maybe arnav wasn't something anjali is expecting but i am glad he loves anjali and khushi! And they are the reason why he came back!
And the precap pics are amazing! Update soon! Can't wait to read the next update!!
OMG Nishaa you know i love your comments.... :D everytime i have a big smile cause of you. Thanks a lot darling! :)
ReplyDeleteHey dear , this is the first time i read this story and just amazing ..loved anjali and khushi's bond and didnt like the other raizada's except arnav ...arnav came only for khushi and anjali yipeeee...do update soon dear .....and one more thing how will i know ua going to update here ....my name in myeduniya is arshi_ love
ReplyDeleteSheema Parveen (arshi_love) dear, You can simply follow me/ my blog from ur google+ account for update notification. Or, You can follow me on Myeduniya. My name in Myeduniya is Ananna123. I will make a separate post on "Second Chance" In MeD just to let you guys notified about the story updates.
DeleteThanks a lot for commenting dear. Feel free to comment! <3