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This part is very big to write. So i had to cut it into two parts. The first part [4(a)] is on Arnav meeting his di, Anjali. The second part will be on Arnav and Khushi. Hope you will enjoy!
Thank you so much guys for reading and commenting in this story. I loved and replied to your comments also. Let me know what you felt through your comments.
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Part 4(a)
Banner credit:: Nisha Shetty (Thank you so much!)
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Arnav entered into the Raizada’s area.He clearly remembers the garden they created the house. His mother, Kavya Singh Raizada was fond of
gardening; and this was before inherited by her son Arnav.
Maybe, It was the only place where she could breath, Arnav
thought. He chocked with emotion… the small rose tree they planted together is
now a big shrub, the jasmine tree has grown so quickly! The fragrance reminded
him of his loved ones.
The loved ones he missed, but there was no way to go them.
“Amma!” He could clearly see two children running towards
their mother. A girl wearing long sleeved ‘choli’ and a long skirt along it,
and a boy wearing simple shirt adorned with ‘swing’ works by his mother.
“Chote!” The girl laughed with her brother, “Amma loves me
the most!” She secretly winked her mother, who smiled.
“No di… mosht me!
(she loves me most!)” Little Arnav frowned.
“Me!”
"Me!"
“Accha accha suno to!”(Ok…ok…atleast listen to me!) Their
amma laughed at her adorable children. “If someone tell you to cut any of your
finger, which one will you choose?”
Arnav and Anjali were confused. Their little brain could not
digest the fact who will ask them to cut finger. And which one? The one gives
you less pain?
“But all fingers will give us same pain, right amma?” Anjali
stated thoughtfully.
“Yes bitiya, we can’t choose any of them, because each of
them are important and will give equal pain. Similarly, both of you are
precious to me.
I cant choose one of you. Never.”
Arnav relived the scene playing before him. Once again he
was a 5 years old kid, who was new to this world. Learning through the
surroundings, through the little world around him.
Once he had a world with his amma, di, babuji, dadi ji.
And Khushi.
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The door opened before his face. There stood his father and
his dadi ji with all the workers of the house. All ready to welcome him with
flowers and sweets.
His deep caramel eyes searched for his loved ones. The
people who truly loved him.
“Thari nazar to uthar doon, chora”(Let me pray for you so
that you may save from black magic, son!) Dadiji smiled bright, though the
smile held lot of slyness behind.
“Koi jarurat nehi.”(not needed.) His eyes held the
determination, “Meri di kahan hai?” (Where is my di?) he asked to her.
“Di!” Her face was curled with frowns, “Your di will not
come here. She is not permitted to come before males… specially not in
scared-happy ceremony.” She said with confidence.
“accha?” (Really?) Arnav mocked. “And who is going to stop
her? You? or, this man?” He shot a look at his father.
“Don’t you dare talk to your elders in that manner chote!”
His father warned. His eyes spitted fire. Arnav is same stubborn and arrogant
to them as before, he realized.
“I don’t have all the time in the world.” Arnav retorted.
“DI!! Di!! Come here! Your chote is waiting and will not
step in till you receive him!” He shouted in the air. He knew his sister will
somewhere, waiting anxiously for his return.
His dadi and father stood with all their anger and gritting
teeth.
"She is a widow! She can't come here!" His father barked. But his words fell on the deaf ear.
A lean figure, draped with pure white and sky blue colored
saree came into his view. Her face was hidden behind big veil. Her steps were
nervous and fearful, he could see her hands trembling and fisting around the
cloth-corner. She stood before him with lowered face.
“Di?” Arnav said affectionately, trying to peep into her
face. But just like him, she was stubborn enough to lift the cloth and show him
her face.
Sighing, he lifted his two hands and took the big cloth away
from her face. His warm smile warmed his sister’s soul, after many years.
Now he looked at his father. "Widow... yes, she is a widow. But 'fortunately' she is a human being also." His words clearly said what he meant.
“Kaisi ho di?" (How are you di?) He asked
eagerly. Both of them were braced with emotions, the memories of their
childhood never left them. Never.
Anjali looked at him with her teary-big eyes and nodded
vigorously, “Let’s go to prayer room, chote!” She look at her dadi with proud face. Her each words came true... her chote came here looking forward to his sister, not his dadi...not his father, who never loved them, never cared for them.
They stepped into the prayer room, their mother’s prayer
room. Both looked at the smiling god stood before them.
Arnav made Anjali sit on the ground, and they both clasped
their hand in a prayer position.
“What will you want from your god di?” Arnav looked at her.
“Your happiness…” She smiled. “And what about you?”
“I don’t believe in her (pointing at the idol) but I have
believe in you.” He spoke, protecting the scared lamp together; they secretly
hope that may be everything will be alright.
“Bless me Di…” Arnav touched her feet with respect, “Bless
me so that I can help you and khushi out of this hell.”
Anjali cupped her cheek. After long years she was at peace. Her heart was assured. She gently kissed his forehead and said through her tears, “My blessings will be- may devi maiya bless you to turn this hell into heaven.”
“Where is Khushi di? Why didn’t she come to me?” Arnav asked
after some time. “I remember her coming behind me where ever I went. Always
trying to copy me, never leaving a chance to be beside me…” He smiled fondly.
“She is not permitted to meet you on the door chote.” Anjali
continued. “I will tell you the reason, but later. First you go and find her.
May be she is hiding somewhere with shyness.” She giggled. “All day all night
she had only one name, Arnav… Arnav and Arnav…But now he is here she is hiding
out of shy!” She pressed her brother’s hands and said, “Go, chote. Your Khushi
is waiting.”
Khushi meant happiness. And Arnav was looking forward to the
happiness of his life.
“Khushi.” He breathed.
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I will try to update as soon as possible. Till then, do show your love!
Allah Hafiz!
Afia Zahin (Ananna123)


Hey Afia, You remember me?? :p I'm Lucky_Arshi from MeD ;)
ReplyDeleteGrr...I'm sorry first of all. My comment was promised when this story was at 2nd part and now I'm commenting when this came to 4(a) :( Do bash me for this ok? I'm getting quite a lazy head nowadays. :/
Anyways coming to the story now, It's really good. I mean, Indian belief's as much as they are hailed as sacred and powerful, they also always hold some cruelty. It's just like always a coin has two sides. Indian certain beliefs are cruel enough not to be followed. We sure walked past them with the generation we are getting into, but still, unfortunately, there are some people and places where this cruelty is still carried out.
Here Dadi is the protryal of the same old people who believe in the very atrocious beliefs which would do nothing but just to make the person enduring it suffer. Her belief of a widow not leaving her room, if she does she may pass the sin in the house, she shouldn't come in front of other males. That's pathetic really.
Avinav is another dark character. He isn't a person of promises and a person eligible to hold the responsibilities, which came true with his behavior towards Khushi. He was behold with the responsibility and trust of his best friend on taking care of his daughter, which he didn't and he is proved a heartless for being his mother treat his daughter the way she want to. He's a portrayal of a irresponsible, heartless person and a father.
Anjali's and Khushi's was a really different characterization. They are these girls blamed to endure the bad luck. They were like destined to endure this.If Khushi is held to lead a bitter and sad life without Arnav, Anjali was pushed to live like that without any mistake of theirs.
Arnav, I really thought he would forget about Khushi or something like that. I really didn't want that to happen. And finally at the end of the 3rd chapter I was relieved he indeed didn't forget anything from his childhood. And the way in his entry he gave th perfect piece of his arrogance to Dadi and Avinav was really awesome. Then the brother sister reunion was too sweet. I was grinning all along this chapter.
Will be waiting for the next part and this story surely is making me desperate Afia, so do continue soon!!
And yup! next time you update, kick me and warn me to read and comment here ok? I'm lazy enough to not consider doing them. So don't feel bothered to scold me ok? I give you full permission :D
Anyways loads of love to you Afia <3 :* Hugs and kisses for you [>:D<]
P.S: Sorry for the mistakes in the comments, I typed them all fast now not in a mood to check back too. :/ Bye!
Extended P.S: Did I mention grammar for the mistakes? No..I didn't so do consider the sorry for the grammar too as I suck at that :/
DeleteSravya!! Thank you so much! Today i got compliment from a good writer so i m considaring my self a happy-and-lucky!
DeleteAnd coming to ur comment.... i loved your update review dear... you wrote my minds language! yes, i wanted to write something where i can show the actual ancient-cruel believes which are hinder in girl's and society's healthy growing. So thanks!
And... did i tell you that spelling mistakes or grammer mistakes are not important? Despite all these mistakes you wrote, and i understood... this is important.
P.S. Thanks for giving me the permission to kick and warn you (though i liked the first one :P) I will definately make you read next time...
With lots of love and hugs....
Your Afia :D
Oh yeah sure....and what you liked first one?? You like kicking me?? :o :o :o aprad hogayi...:p Anyways I guess for the next you wouldn't need anything more than throwing a word of updating...as that's the most waiting part for me for now. Arnav is going to meet Khushi yaar!! I'm almost restless :D
Delete"Widow... yes, she is a widow. But 'fortunately' she is a human being also." I loved this line! Will Avinav and arnav's dadi ever understand that?
ReplyDeleteArnav asked about anjali as soon as he came ignoring them! I really hope he changes everything that's going on in that house!
Arnav's mom is so sweet and caring! Loved the explanation she gave when arnav and anjali were fighting over who she loves!!
Great job dear!
Looking forward for next update!!
Nisha Di, you betcha! I loved that line too very much.
DeleteSorry, I didn't mention in my comment Afia.
Another cute comment! thank you Nisha! (Are you my di...meaning are you older enough call you di or not???)
DeleteLoved your analysis yaar.... my hard work is worth of these lovely comments ...hai na?? :D :D
I am 21 but i don't mind you calling me nisha!
DeleteActually you deserve much more dear:)
BTW, when are you planning to update? I am very excited for the next update!
You r 21?? then i m not going call you di... cause i m also 21 years old (this month actually) :D
DeleteAnd about post.... i have update dear, check that and do comment :) :)
Afia...next update kab? I'm waiting yaar. It's natural you know right? It's Arnav and Khushi are meeting, I want to know what is going to happen. Update soon pleaseeee......
ReplyDeletei m delaying because of eid :P but soon will update....dont worry!
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